Monday, 16 December 2019

10 foods I would take on an ocean voyage

10 foods I would take on an ocean voyage
1. Fresh produce because it will probably stay fresh and it will supply you with vitamin c
2. Dry cereal but you can't just take it in the bag you must put the cereal in a sealed container so they don't go stale 
3.Water because you just need water or you will be dehydrated
4. Powdered milk because it has lots of nutrients and it is more ideal to take than normal milk if you want/need milk
5. Bread because it doesn't need to be in a fridge
6. Butter it lasts okay in the cupboard
7.Canned fruit because it doesn't go off
8. Snack foods like muesli bars for energy
9. Lollies because they are available for when you need a sugar rush
10. Peanut butter for a good source of protein 

1 comment:

  1. Mōrena Kayla,

    This is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey, and I will be commenting on your posts during your time participating in the SLJ.

    I enjoyed reading what kinds of foods you would choose to take to sea with you, I like how you came up with reasons why you should take each food. I noticed that you added fresh produce, I love fruit - especially during summer time! What is your favourite fruit or vegetable?

    In order to allow for your readers to connect more with your writing, you could add a photo that relates to it.

    Hei konā mai
    Charlotte

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