In week 10 my classroom had to write about a moment in time that we have experienced. We had to go into deep detail so that it felt like the reader was experiencing the moment just from reading it. The class had 15 minutes to plan and then 30 minutes to write. This is my writing piece after I edited the sample myself which we had 15 minutes to do and also was marked by my teacher who had left things for me to change.
This is my digital sheet of my writing levels and goals. The light blue coloured squares are the level I am on, and the green coloured squares are what i'm aiming for.
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